The unrhymed Depression

by The Poetic Child   Jul 20, 2006


It Hurts so very much
to see you stand right there
To see you smiling my face
and know i cant reach you

I'm reaching out to you now
but theres a barrier blocking
I'm stuck in this small box
and I'm crying so many tears

I'm like a mime on the street
everyone sees but doesn't care
and I'm really trying to talk to you
but your not even listening

Please just send out your arm girl
I hate waking up in the night crying
Hoping that one day id wake up
and find that your laying next to me

I cry every night your not here
I cry every night i don't hear your voice
the tears trace down my cheek fast
and your not here to wipe them away

Right now your away and you want to be
and I'm sure you want to be away
to be away from me forever
but really...I need you forever

I guess you weren't really messing
When you were singing that song
"I'm Single" By Natasha
but i prayed that you were joking

It hurts to know that you want someone
You want someone so really bad
but they don't give you an ear
for them to hear what you have to say

Well Katie, I'm giving you this voice
just listen to what i have to say
listen to how i feel for you
listen to me...for once

baby i love you like no other
my heart is going crazy for you
and every second of my life
your not here. adds a tear to me

every second your not
a knife flies right at my heart
and i hate every time it misses
because i want it to to end

I want you read this and this good
i want you to see how much i love you
i want you to understand what i feel
i want you to know i Really Care

I hope as you read this right now
you see your everything to me
that you see i love you really
and that you know its so true

I want you to know that I'm there
and that you don't want to lose me
cause the very second that you do
The Gun is pulled to my head

I love you Girl Soooo Much
Its Not even something i can say
I'm trying to find another word
but all i can say is...I love you

you've broken my heart
In so many places
but yet you made me love
like i never thought i could

you made me realize
that i need you
you made me realize
with-out you I'm nothing

and i know its usually the girl
who says how much they need the man
but i need you like i never needed
i need you sooo very much

This last line will rhyme
I love you is really my confession
No fun, no games I'm serious
this is my..Un-rhymed depression

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    From what I've read so far you're quite good at expressing your emotions, but when it comes to analogies and structure you stick to rigid forms that don't show any real flair.

    I like how this flows, and making that last stanza rhyme (and making the fact a declaration) was quite clever. But it is over-long and lacking some finesse.

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Oh MF you are really an expirienced man you can write anything this one is great AWSOME every sentence that you put on this one describe everything your emotions flows very well every reader feel a great pain that you feel i can relate to this one and i already past this feeling . and man truly i say this to you your great as much as i know 5 for this one and thanks for posting this i remember my old love ones