Not Enough

by Lady Nik   Jul 24, 2006


You remind me of the sun, as it sets.
You remind me of the mistakes I regret..
Like a spoon full of pain medicine.
There isn't enough in the world for me to forget..
So I put on my smile of happiness.
Then maybe I can rest.
Not Enough

With my head hanging low to the ground.
I thought you were a treasure I had found.
More like a bad act, preformed by a circus clown.
How am I supposed to feel now?
That's my only question how?
Not Enough

To fill my mind with so much love.
You had me lifted like the clouds above.
To tell me so many beautiful words.
Now I see that, that was a set up.
Those words were like glue, they kept me stuck.
But really you didn't love me that much.
Not enough
*plz comment*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Elisa

    Not bad i like it Not somehting I would write only cause they end up never loving me lol but yeah i could feel you were hurting and it was good not many people can actually make people feel the pain your good and thanks u were my first comment I'm going to be adding more poems later if u want to read them just to let you know

    oh yeah that peom was because my brother was levaeing me for his gf if u read everyday you will understand

    Elisa

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna

    Very well written! i could relate...keep up the great work! your an awesome writer! 5/5

    ~Crying Angel~
    JennaLeigh

    ...also thanks for your comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megan

    It's really nice...i like it alot...it's def fine as is bu if ur lookin for sumtin to change it a little more imagry maybe...u have some there...and it's really good imagery bu theres a line or 2 that u dont get a very clear image...ur a really good writer....

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very nicely done. I really liked the repitition in this, It was wonderful. Such a sad poem though, Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    Good work, I love the part about the clown.

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