Tide Of Misfortune

by End Of Eternity   Jul 26, 2006


Castle of sand beneath the dirt of my feet
ruining the dreams of tide to wash it away
the only thing i called my own with pride
reconstructing again in my nightmares everyday

wounded heart with the passion of endless sky
embracing my soul to keep it as red as wine
eyes have blinked at the very moment of glory
and the strange desires for life are no more mine

do you know, somethings just never change
in a world where air is bound by endless pain
faces look strange but destiny remains the same
in a world where there is nothing for us to gain

castle of dreams beneath the kiss of misery
breathing heavily to live for one more day
inside a fragile soul there is still a hope to see
the tide of misfortune turning the other way

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  • 19 years ago

    by Gem

    "ruining the dreams of tide to wash it away"

    That image got to me.
    And i liked the use of castle and what it could mean in this poem.
    Well done =)
    5.5
    *Gem*

  • 19 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Great work. loved it, great detailing and everything, amaing. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by purva bhatia

    My my..... you make such beautiful use of words!!!!

    Beautiful :)

    purva

  • 19 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Does the tide of misfortune turn the other way? I hope so.. You have certainly shown there is hope that it may. Well done on such a thought provoking poem. xx

  • 19 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Inside a fragile soul there is still a hope to see
    the tide of misfortune turning the other way

    there is something so deep in these words - masterful play of words, my friend.

    you've outdone yourself again.
    peace
    shobhana

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