by Jessica Jul 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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Love and smiles flowed from within |
by UnToLd TrUtH
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Aww this is another one of your sweet ones! I really liked it, it was different! |
by Polly
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So sad... Perfectly written, I don't really know what to say...Well done it is great 5/5 |
by Megann Lee
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I love these types of poems. It didn't ryhme though, but it doesn't have to, cause they are not requiered to ryhme just some do, and honestly I don't care. I enjoyed it anyway. |
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Beautifully written, and bitterly sad---Great epitaph though! Keep it up! |
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I liked the way you described the person as someone good that used to live, but still lives in the hearts of the ones who loved her/him. I'm not sure about the last line, though. |