Daddy Killed Me (childs Point Of Veiw)

by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-   Jul 28, 2006


Drunken with rage
tearing my clothes
hit by my daddy
I'm only 6 years old

black are my eyes
bruised is my skin
hurt are my feelings
i know i cant win

he is so angry
i don't know why
but when my daddy has a drink
he tries to make me die

daddy hits my mummy
daddy hits me too
i don't know why
he seems to have fun making me black and blue

one late night
i heard him come home
but he sounded angrier than before
then i heard alot of screaming
then i found mommy on the floor

then i heard my daddy
breathing in my ear
your mummy did something bad and know shes dead
he whispered in my ear

and there that night he killed me
and left me lying in the cold
my daddy cut my life short
when i was only six years old

please comment, i would mean alot
to me, thanks and love Mel

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  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Omg that poem is AMAZING i love the flow of ur words in it 5/5...my dad does that to but....he isen't drunk he's just always like that:(
    auna

  • 17 years ago

    by ~#~tHe TeArS bEhInD tHe MaSk~#~

    Dang how do u write such good poems? i could never have as much talent as you!!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by brianna

    That just grabbed me right in...you really cant describe the thoughts in your head as you are reading it but i really think you got talent

  • 17 years ago

    by sickoflies

    That was a great poem 5/5. one of the lines that realy stuk to me was
    black are my eyes
    bruised is my skin
    hurt are my feelings
    i know i cant win

    it remined me of a book about a girl whos dad abuses her. Baster out of carolina. good book.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow thts really sad......i lik it alot...it makes me cry though...a 5/5 for me..

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