Move On

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Jul 29, 2006


When the world keeps turning
And your stuck in one place
It feels that the world blames you
When the one person you loved
Walked out on you
Its hard and painful to move on
But when that one person
Was your structure of your whole life
You break down
And it takes more then words
To get you back up
The world doesnt stop for heartbreaks
And when you fall back
And start to cry
They just tell you to
Suck it up and move on
Dont worry
I know how you feel
Ill take the time to listen to you
And help you gather your emotions
And help you little by little
So your able to erase those memories
Of your heartbreaker
And move on with the world

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashla

    5/5. Great poem! Awesome writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow..i can really relate on this 1......i think this 1 i liked the best cuz i can relate......a 10000/5 for me

  • 17 years ago

    by Damien

    Keep it up! I could see a Joni Mitchell in you words yet

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Not too bad... Very true. Though I didn't like the flow of the poem at all.. It really took away from it. Sorry.

    xDarkSuicidex 4.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    ♥~4ever-N-ever~♥ --
    Hey, remember me? Lol! Well, I had to give this poem a 4/5. If there is ONE THiNG that I really look for in poetry, it`s the spelling and grammar. You have a couple of mistakes ;; and that`s definitely a thumbs down for me. It seemed to flow alright. I would go through the poem carefully, make sure that you are using the right 'your'`s, and that everything makes sense. Because right now, it doesn`t. Overall, nice job, though! Good moral // theme.

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

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