Thank The Angels

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Aug 2, 2006


The touch of your head
Resting on mine,
Your soft arms around me
Makes me cry.

Each petal of a rose
Symbolizes your beautiful self,
Your soft natural face
Blessed with loving wealth.

Your amazing blue eyes
Is like the heavens above,
whom shower your caring self
with wisdom and love.

Your peachy soft lips
I am kissed by a saint,
god gives me this happiness,
for it is my fate.

my life is so perfect
with this boi in my life,
so i thank the angels
for making this right.

much care went into this poem i would like criticism to improve my poetry thnx xxx

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I cant criticize because it was beautiful and i saw no faults, it was written well and flowed okay.
    you have talent
    xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "Your peachy soft lips
    I am kissed by a saint,
    god gives me this happiness,
    for it is my fate."

    So beautiful, you're vocab is really soft and tender and it gives out some great emotion
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by XxSilentScreamXx

    Great show of your feelings.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    This poem shows such emotion n really brings out the love you feel for him. it is something that no one should wish to change. it is your thoughts perfectly writen with the pen at your fingertips.

  • 17 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    How the hell can u criticise such an amazing poem. haha its great : )

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