Surprise I\'m A Total Waste

by Raychel   Aug 3, 2006


I\'m unfeeling

surprise!

like you didn\'t know that already.

i\'m dead
you\'ve known that all along

haven\'t you.

i want to be normal
but no matter how hard i try
i lose

i\'m a loser

i fail at everything i do.

i\'m surprised i was able to have you.

however short
or
painful

i did love you

i just didn\'t love myself enough

enough to keep the best thing in my life happy

though i tried
though i cried

it just wasn\'t enough to keep you around

i\'m helpless

your not surprised

Raychel

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  • 17 years ago

    by chris

    A poem that reminds me of a person I once new when I was about 16, there is a wonderful understanding that can come from a life and thoughts like that if you can find it. Another wonderful poem, that captures thoughts and emotions brilliantly. Chris

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Unusual format but great style with it. It clearly shows how you are pouring your feelings into the writing.
    It was really sad and the disjointed emotion came through well in the disjointed style.

  • 17 years ago

    by lana

    Wow girl thats so sad
    your letting your feelings come out in there lines well done
    sometimes its hard
    that i know

    but keep wrighting you do have talent

    lana

  • 17 years ago

    by { The Jesster }

    Wow! I really liked that. I haven't seen a poem written in that style in a long time. You have talent, keep it up.

    Jessie

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