Rearrange Me

by Raychel   Aug 4, 2006


I wish i could rearrange my brain

make it normal
make it feel

feel the pain of a razor blade
pain from the words you speak
pain from the stares burning threw me

i wish i could rearrange my heart

make it whole
make it love

love me for who i am
not who i want to be
not what i can't be

i wish i could rearrange my depression

make it go away
make it fake

(this poem feels like it's not finished yet, so this is a working progress)

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  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I liked this one the best of those that I read as it seemed to have more thought behind it.
    I think it has an ending in itself but there may be room for more. I look forward to seeing if you add anything.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    I loved the last little bit of this poem. I am sure alot of people feel this way at times, but you can't chnage yourself, so you might as well make the best of what you have. I liked this poem more than the last one i read.

    Good work

    --Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    Even if it is not quite finished in your mind, this would make a good ending. I like this poem...tell me when you are finished, it is good and i would like to read the new ending you have for it.

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