She!

by Catastrophic Beauty   Aug 4, 2006


She is screaming, no one is listening.
She is crying, her eyes are glistening.
She is sitting, back against her door.
Blood's pouring, onto the cold floor.
Eyes swollen, from a dreadful sight.
Body shaking, endlessly in the night.

She is alone, lost in a deserted room.
She is wondering, if this is her doom.
She is dying, inhaling her final breath.
Tongue's poisoned, by tastes of death.
Face stained, from the tears she cried
Body is cold, this beaten girl has died.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Moose

    Through the first stanza it almost made me think that this poem was relating back to the stereotypical emo cutting poems that flood the sad/depressing genres on the site... (including a few of mine =( from way back...) But thankfully it had some meaning ;)

    It is very sad and abuse is something many people have to deal with on a daily basis, not a lot know how horrid it can be sometimes, but in ways described in your poem, the vivid detail is enough to send shivers down a grown mans spine.

    Great poem.
    ~Bryce

  • 16 years ago

    by Naerwen

    This again, like many of your poems, is short in length, but by no means lacking in emotion and immediate reaction. Very strong piece of writing, nice flow to it. I will invest more time into your poetry.

    Well done

    Best wishes

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well try not to repeat 'she' many times xD coz it kinda messes up the flow.. well anyway this was an emotional piece, good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    I really Like This Poem ! You Are Very Talented =)

  • 16 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Thats really good. the rhythem is wonderful. deffanitely a 5/5

    xo kisses xo

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