Innocent

Awwwwww....thts sooo sad.....now i wnt to cry rite now....... a 5/5 keep on writing!!

That's so sad. It brought a tear to my eye. Lovely structure and flow of the poem aswell. Good job.

Oh my gosh. This was really sad, and it reminds me alot of my brother, who only passed away when he was 11 months old. Very emotional write here, and I loved how you did the writing at the start of each stanza with the star before it. If that makes sense? ..anywho, it was great. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Wow...That was really good... It was such a different story from what you normally hear.

xDarkSuicidex5.5

Wow. that was amazing.
you really explained it well.
i got a really clear image.
awsome.
oh and thanks for the honesty.
the poems was meant to confuse people sort of. it's about any person who has ever killed themselve because of what someones said or done to them. and ive came close but...i wont do it because i know ill make it just fine and theyll be the ones to burn in hell. ok later.
jessica-