Guardian Angel

by Jessica   Aug 7, 2006


As shining tears slowly form in my eyes
A hand is placed lovingly on my arm
Wiping away the droplets of water
To cradle and remove me from any harm..

My eyes are sparkling with joy
On my lips is a sweet little smile
You are there with me, laughing merrily
I know you shall be here for a while..

Mouth slowly quivering, eyes growing big
A panicked heart leaps into my throat
I shiver hysterically with cold, hard, fear
Until you bring me a big, warm, coat..

To love and protect me forevermore
Pure goodness all the way through
A cloud of fluffiness covers me
My guardian angel are you..

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Until you bring me a big, warm, coat
    ((Ewwww))

    This wasn't bad, but it definately wasn't your best.. And how come this isn't in love?

    xDarkSuicidex 4.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Awh. You made this really sweetly written. I can't seem to write a good poem about angels or guardian angels. Yet you managed to write this one beautifully. Really Jessy, wonderful poems. All the ones I have read. It's amazing. :]

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Nice job, but the end didn't really sound like an end, maybe add more to it.

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good, nice descriptions. Your rhymes were basic.

  • 17 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    A very sweet poem. Nice flow, nice imagery. Great job 5/5

    ~ Tina

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