I Will Love You Till...

by Tormented   Aug 7, 2006


Till the sun stops shining
Till the birds stop singing
Till the stars stop sparkling
Till the earth stops spinning
I will Love you

Till the time thorns don't hurt
Till the time flowers look ugly
Till the time Mountains crumble
Till the time this fire inside me dies
I will love you

Till the snow stops being white
Till the night stops being dark
Till the sky stops being blue
Till the winter becomes summer
I will love you

Till these feelings vanish
Till these thoughts disappear
Till the numbers end
I will love you

Till the angels kill
Till the devil cries
Till the hell dries
Till the judgment day
I will love you

Till no living thing lives
Till the time ends and beyond
Till the day I die
And Even after that
I WILL love you

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  • 19 years ago

    by LiveTogetherDieAlone

    Very nice poem to, see you rhymed there .. good job i giveya a 5

  • 19 years ago

    by BlAcK RoSe

    I like this alot needs abit more emotion keep writing chick
    thanks

    can u comment on some more ta thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by Nee

    Aw, I love the ending of this poem
    very sweet, @ first I didnt want to read it but when I read comments I was like"No I will" =-D

    keeo it up
    xxxxxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Beautiful. To love that much is a truly amazing thing, and you have captured it wonderfully. Well done. xx

  • 19 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very sweet poem. Usually I don't repetitive lines, but you applied it well

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