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by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Aug 8, 2006


When it comes you
I cant help but fall to my knees
Rip open my skin
And tear out my heart
Everything that I did
Was for you
Everything I lied about
Was to make you happy
The stuff I wore
Was to make you think
I wasnt some stupid girl
But someone who had everything
I paid people
To act like my friends
To make me seem so popular
But I just gave up
I gave it all up when I saw you with her
Because I knew
What you saw in me
Was all fake

* I know its not good but plz dont be harsh.. ill redo it soon when i get a better idea to write it on *

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashla

    Awww5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Hunny!!! i loved it, and you shuldnt change it because that is the way you feel and it is great like that!! you really have some talent and defiantely a 5/5 from me!!!

    xoxo Lucy

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow.......thts really good......ur a awsome poet!! keep on writing...

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was pretty good.. it describes how you feel very well... the descriptions could be improved but they still worked..

    When it comes you
    ^ i think you are missing a "to" before "you"

    nice job, keep it up! 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fact and Fiction

    Baby i didn't think it was all that bad. Have a little faith in your self darling.
    -Amanda

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