My Sorry Is Not Enough

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Aug 8, 2006


* This is for my boy * (I'm sorri babe x)

Although I've never cheated,
my precious heart does lie,
i broke your heart my baby,
and you found out i lied.

You called at 3 when i was crying,
You told me how you feel,
For the first time in my wasted life,
I deeply felt evil.

Id already took the pills by then,
And was confused in my words,
You came and got me baby,
Even after i hit you were it hurts.

That call changed everything,
You told me its hard to show your pain,
You told me you still would trust me,
And from my mistake i would gain.

You said you want me forever,
With our kids and a nice home,
You want to get out of this area,
And didn't want to be alone.

I cried and cried for doing wrong,
I then understood what id done,
You cried to your male friends,
You risked your rep for my love.

So my sorry will never be enough,
But its only me that you need,
So i shall never leave your side,
Because you give me eyes to see.

Love you David baby and I'm sorry xx

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I liked the message in this poem it was very sweet and touching. But the way it was written, was a little off in some areas. The flow seemed forced, and a little to direct. And the writing its self needs a little bit more work.

    just some of the basics (and make sure that all of your I are capatilized, it really takes the reader out of the power of the poem)
    Id = I'd
    its = it's

    nice message though, just try and work on your technique a little bit.

  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    I love it, way to go! I'm more for sad and dark poems...but I really like that one. I give it a 5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Ahaaaaa.. true love shines from your words. nicely done. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Soo touching n deep!...great work on this 1!!...the rhymes,descriptions-just remarkable,excellent!!..i can relate too!!
    loved it!!...5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Andi

    U r a remarkable writer...i love how everything u write almos anyone in the world can relate to....good job
    andi