Fire [Lanturne]

by Jessica   Aug 13, 2006


......Hot......
..Flames lick..
.Bringing heat.
..To our icy..
.....Lives....
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Lanturne:
A type of poetry in which when it is centered, it resembles the Japanese lantern.
It has a strict syllable pattern of 1, 2, 3, 4, 1.

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  • 17 years ago

    by sally

    BEAUTIFUL

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Elegant style, nice use of words.

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    How did you come up with those forms of poems your style was very unique and simply good and yeah pretty interesting great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Woah. Different, creative and definately unique. Short but effective and well written. Wonderful job. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Very creative. I loved this poem. It makes sense and flows too. Ha. Great Job. :]

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