Ill Never Stop loving you

by The Poetic Child   Aug 13, 2006


Holding you so gently to me
Moments that I treasure
The feeling of love on me
Is such satisfaction and pleasure

More beauty then the Reddest rose
an aesthetic I cant believe
eyes that make me freeze
Grasping my air till I breathe

The way she makes my life
seem like its so great and true
Being reminded of my treasure
As she whispers "I love you"

The seconds that she is gone
theres so many urges to yell
To yell that I want her more
Its such a True love..cant you tell

Putting my life on the line for her
Picturing us walking down the aisle
Imagining The beauty she portrays
Every thought is a reason to smile

The list can go on and on forever
detailing every moment of her
From the day we first met
To the moment shes a mother

The face of an Angel
A heart of a lion
Never giving up
When she sees me crying

I'll love you as much I can
I vow to be loyal and true
I vow that you'll be in my heart
I vow I'll never stop Loving you..

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  • 17 years ago

    by kato

    This is beautifully written, you have so much talent!!
    Much love goin out to ya,

    Kato

  • 17 years ago

    by Denise

    Awww...another sad....poem thingy mabober...lol...im kidding...me likey aloty.....lol....anyways...K.U.T.G.W(keep up the good work)

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    WHOA! that poem is a BOMB it like blew me away..lol! but yeh its very good...The flow great flow, great description but i loved ending the most...and yeh its a PERFECT love poem! 5/5

    Keep It Up
    And
    Keep Smiling

    Much Love
    Tormented