Non Bullet Proof

by Natalie   Aug 14, 2006


Chains hauling emotions down,
Pressuring force against bones,
Trapping bleak words inside lips,
Attacking with hard bullet stones,
Shooting towards unknown lives,
Unprotected through war fields,
Lurching pass wide open roads,
Carrying non bullet proof shields.

Fear's steering now with control,
Taking lead of these weak wheels,
Proceeding down unseen lanes,
Murdered once they start to heal,
Leaking truth from unsealed pipes,
Drowning victims under disguise,
Released from hell; armed alone,
Falling asleep with pouring eyes.

August 14th 2006
Copyright (c) Natalie.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Perfect structure.
    Perfect flow.
    Perfect words.

    no criticism. seems like u have it all undercontrol.
    ~Emah
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ImNoTpErFEct

    That was beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    5/5
    You put meaning to words.
    Then you put them into sentences.
    Its incredible each line is its own heartbreak.
    I love your work
    ~emah

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    I lik this one but for some reason im scared......well keep on writing with your master pieces of poetry....

  • 17 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    Mm now that I read it a second time it makes much more sense.. its about war and many other things at the same time... i actually really like this poem :D