Chambers (Pleiades)

by HOLLY ARMER   Aug 14, 2006


Cruelty fuels my madness
churning from within as
crimson dreams fall away
callousing my heart while
charcoal thoughts run rampant
chasing me into the darkest
chamber of lunacy....

Pleiades:
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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Interesting form. I like your use of a metaphor and the word choice was good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Lovely pleiades... n thankz 4 stumbling on ur profile accidentally n learnt d existence of yet another form of poetry.

    Lovely .... keep it up... Wud like 2 thank u 4 sharing 199 wonderful poems n still thousands more thoughts that made other poets days here....

    Best wishez for ur double century... n u deserve it in style..

    Keep it up

    Best wishes 4 ur 200th poem to come ....

    Karan

  • 18 years ago

    by Shauna

    Great Poem!!

    5.5**
    <3

  • 18 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, new to me , but I like it a lot, sad in form but very unique, great job , keep it up your friend Tracy dean 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very well structured poem. Nice lines... Great to read!

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