Cosy Campfires [Cinquain]

Jessy,

I loved this poem!

Wrapped cosily inside big warm
Blankets is and reads as 1 sentence with 10 syllables
maybe you should change that into 2 realy seperate lines of 8 and 2

Lol, I don't know why but this made me smile... It was just the ending. I don't know, but it was nicely done. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

OMG Jess you totally just described my family and friends on summer nights..we always have bonfires and thats what we all do! It made me smile! I love this style of writing this was excellent!
Krissey

Short, but really good. i like it. i could never write a poem like this tho i would think too hard about it lol. but u did good!