Black Makeup

by Jessica   Aug 19, 2006


Stomach tied tightly in knots
Tears falling from tender eyes
Smiles wiped from happy faces
This is why she no longer tries..

Black makeup badly smudged
Hair hanging limp and split
Small shoulders sadly drooping
In this world she will never fit..

Silently sitting at home in the dark
Night and day her broken soul cries
All love disappearing from her life
On this sad day, a young girl dies..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marissa

    Love you work!
    Keep on writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by alana

    Great poem...
    its very descriptive and flows. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dyingxxxalone

    Not to worry anyone (and not that anyone cares) but that reminds me of myself A LOT...except for the suicide part...uhm, yeah. anyway i really like this poem and your descriptive words are great :-)

  • 17 years ago

    by Rosie

    Awwwww... this poem really hit the spot i feel like i was there to witness what happend to the girl in this poem... i give u a 10/10 keep ^ the good work!!!

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    sign, Rosie

  • 17 years ago

    by Hind

    Nice poem...its rythme is great..5-5