This Amazing Party

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Aug 19, 2006


Tonight I snuck out
For an amazing party
I was invited to go
And said I would be there
I could've said no
But it was th eonly way to be popular
So I choose to go
You were invited too
So I bring you with me
Driving in my truck
Talking about our younger days
As I zip through the back roads
And hour later
We arrive ready to party together
Walking through those doors
It's all good
For now
Endless hours of dancing
Shooting up heroine
Smoking cocaine
Drinking beer
Taking shots
Toxicing us with battery acid
I am happy I gone
Cause I'm having fun
At this amazing party
After hours of shooting up
This stuff that would
Turn our happy moments
All wrong and sad
It's 5:00 now
It takes an hour to get home
So we leave
Glad we came to this amazing party
We drive home
In silence
As you fall asleep
As I try fighting it
It's 5:45 now
Hoping my parents wont mind
That I snuck out
But I sway off that thought
And concentrate on the road
There's two roads in my eyes
And those long, white streaks
Blur left to right, right to left
I look ahead of me
Seeing white lights whirling
A horn honking
There's a big crash
Metal twisted and crammed
Blood everywhere
Unidenitfialbe faces
Aare formed in a second
Unbroken hearts
Will be broken with in the hour
The news of this
Will be broad casted at the 6:oo A.M News
Headlines will be
"Drugged Teenagers crash after partying"
How can I be popular now
When I'm dead
From this amazing party
I see flashing red, white and blue lights
Sirens wailing
And hundreds of people running for our rescue
One firefighter says
"Get this girl out
She's never going to survive
They've been doing drugs
We got to get to her first
Someone get him too"
I keep trying to tell them
To help you first
There help is useless
I'm pronounced dead at the scene
You only make it half way through
Your pronounced dead on arrival
Ten minutes after me
Right as they pull up to the hospital
Now each of our families are
Looking through albums
Looking for a memory
A memory of me
A memory of you
But they cant seem to find
A picture
That explains what happened to us
We're dead now
And we cant come back now
Cause we died of something terrible
A horrible, horrible car accident
Just because we thought
It would be fun
To go to an amazing party
That ended up killing someone
Which ended with us
Now I think
it wasn't a good idea
To go to that party
What was so amazing now
About the party we went to
The party we thought was amazing
What was so good about
This Amazing Party

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  • 17 years ago

    by Antares

    It read smoothly to me, i loved it. easy to visualize. 10/10

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashla

    Great poem! I think it was well put together

  • 17 years ago

    by *unpredictable*

    It was a touching poem, and i liked it a lot. it reminded me of a poem that i had gotten my e-mail. one of those chains. it was good, and there were a few grammar and spelling mistkes. at the beginning there was a space between a letter that was supposed to be in a word. but that's fine, cuz it's a great poem. great job!! :-D