Letting me Go

by The Poetic Child   Aug 20, 2006


Thunder Storms and Lonely Nights
Feelings inside when you went away
Pain to every inch and part of my skin
The very second you left me that day

I thought what we had was special
But it was nothing more than just another game
You took this heart which was already broken
Pushing me through a point of shame

Disgusted look in the mirrors
Realizing every miss-perfection
Everything seems so wrong
From Looks to Complexion

my heart is filled with emptiness
since your feelings fade
I sit home and think
how it was me you betrayed

Slowly reading the news you put out
And then slowly a tear came to creep
Pushing to try and get you out my mind
But you haunt my mind when I sleep

Its torture to me how you did this
You broke me more then you know
Laying down feeling so pathetic
Hoping you’d regret letting me go

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Collaboration with Nathan
MF, N, MF, N .....
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  • 17 years ago

    by me

    Great job it had a nice flow and emotion and stuff u and nathan did a greadt job i liked it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Denise

    Awwww...i likey

  • 17 years ago

    by christina marie

    But but but IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII am your collab buddy. :(

    Nathan I hate you. >:(
    Oh yeah..5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Hey!
    MF this is an excellent poem!
    The flow was great!
    There was a lil rhyming which seemed to work!
    All i can say is that you and your friend did an excellent job on this one!5/5

    Keep it up!
    And
    Keep smiling

    -*-Tormented

  • 17 years ago

    by nathan

    Ha i suck but not to bad of a poem only cuz of you....5/5 of course