Good bye

by Sweet lig   Aug 20, 2006


It is too hard to accept
You leave me with out
Saying goodbye
I felt you cheat me
Not only once!

Don't you know its too unfair?
You don't even think about me
You never think that
You make me hurt so badly,

Until now, I'm trying to understand
what is your real reason
That you leave me
Head is too painful for thinking,

My life become unconditional
And so messy
I'm too much hurt you know!
We both know how much
We cared this relation

But i think its just easy for you
To forget everything with us
Why don't you try to explain
I am here patiently listened
Ready to face and understand
Your reason why?

Just be honest and tell me the truth
Its really hurt that you leave me
With out saying anything from me
Please, please tell me why?
i will accept everything...

Every words you say,
Just tell me,
I'm here ready
To admit everything,

Just want to hear from you
The reason why you go
And leave me
I'm trying to comprehend
Every words you say

Please go back and say the word goodbye
Saying goodbye is enough to hear from you
Just to know that you go away and leave me
Thats why I'm not like a stupid
waiting for nothing
Goodbye is enough if u doesn't want to explain

Deep in my wounded heart
I hardly admit and accept
Even its too hard and too much painful
well...saying GOODBYE.....

is enough

***too sad when someone say goodbye to us. sometimes its hard to think that someone leave you more that person is the one you love! but for me it is more sad and painful is someone leave me with out saying anything! with out saying the word good bye.. well.. maybe its better i never heard anything from them.. for me its enough to say that he or she saying good bye. thats why i know that he/she not mine anymore! that he/she belong to someone else.! some of us are getting to hurt and very sad when they heard the words GOODBYE!

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  • Another good poem, but the first stanza didn't really make sense. There were mispelled words and missing words. You wrote:

    "It is too hard to accept
    You leave me with out
    Saying goodbye
    I felt you cheat me
    Not only once!"

    I think it sounds better like this:

    "It is too hard to accept
    You leaft me with out
    Saying goodbye
    I felt you cheated on me
    Not only once!"

    I think it sounds better. Other than that, it's pretty good.

    .:CiNdY:.

  • This is a really beautiful poem. It's just those spelling errors that kill the poem. It's good though!

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    Wow this was very emotional
    it was well written and kept me reading till i finished which is a good thing :P
    u have alot of talent
    good job

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww very very emotinal. Yes, goodbye is sometimes all we need, I really loved the topic, and that can take that poem in different ways. Touching piece for me.
    5/5 Amazing, keep that up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I could relate deeply to the emotion you are describing in this piece. It was sad and heartbreaking. I truly enjoyed it. Well done *5/5*