Always {Septolet}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Aug 26, 2006


Always
Do I try
To mend
Broken things;

Every
Injured soul
Has broken
Wings.

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The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines containing fourteen words with a break in between
the two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Elynnka

    I've read this a while ago, but forgot to comment and vote XD I liked it sooooo much! Althought it's short it's really sweet! The rhyme makes it awesome! I don't know why I like it so much... but I do XD
    So wonderful work! Maybe I'll try that form XD
    10/5 !!

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow,
    another 5/5 from me...

  • 17 years ago

    by DepthofPassion

    Wow! This is so simple but yet so amazing it paints such a vivid picture for me.You are such a gifted writer.

  • 17 years ago

    by Amanda

    Beautifully written and such a great way to express yourself. I'm not too sure on dark poems but yours was class. You have talent and it shines through your work :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Beautiful poem!!! The simplicity of your words are so intense. What a lovely poem with great meaning. Keep up the great work. 5/5

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