Alone I break

by Logan   Aug 27, 2006


My love shows for nothing,
Emotions fade into absence,
A heart beating for no-one,
A pointless existence,

A life so empty,
yet so full,
the darkness within,
its never ending pull,

To live is generous,
to die is greedy,
a life complicated,
death is eerie,

a need for trust,
a need to believe,
the reason i'm here,
is not to decieve,

do you feel me,
a touch so deathly,
do you see me,
eyes so empty,

do you understand me,
a mind so hollow,
do you hear me,
full of woe,

beginning to overpower me,
the darkness inside,
coming to a point,
where I can longer hide,

reaching the limit,
no more can i take,
living a hollow existence,
alone i break.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ

    Oh wow..that was soo good...keep it up i loved it..ur very talented sorry about what happened to u tho..i do understand..so anyways 5/5

    ~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

  • 19 years ago

    by Megan

    "Emotions fade into absence" i feel apathetic at times. nice work ;-)

  • 19 years ago

    by Loulou

    Good poem i like this one you show alot of emotion in it. The flow is off in some places but it is still very wonderful. Great job. 5/5