I Dare You

by Georgi   Aug 31, 2006


Outstanding, but careful. Calm, deep reflections.
Once passed through the spaces behind her perfection.
Look through the image of soft diamond blue,
Get lost in such beauty. Go on, I dare you.

The lighting fast shock of the first winter stare,
Leaves envy, confusion, strips sanity bare.
Amazes and baffles, leaves no compromise,
Just oceans of blue in her beautiful eyes.

She makes no sound, of course, there's no need.
Fight her for words? Her eyes laugh as you plead.
She knows if she trusts you, keeps faith in the sight,
Her mind knows the feeling, eyes back up the fight.

Eyes tighten. Exhale... Disastrous blue light,
Pours from the beauty, closed. Almost shut tight.
It hits your cold stomach, pushes you far away,
From now, she can disregard all that you say.

You fool, I did warn you. You hurt her too deep.
Out of all of your tears there's so much she can keep.
But it doesn't take long till her eyes reach the limit,
Drowned in the tears you left on your last visit.

When travelling past her and into the blue,
You have to be careful with what you pass through.
Admire the beauty, but don't get too near,
Or she'll reconsider out of depression and fear.

I told you, be careful! Don't push once you're in,
Your need for attention will pull on her skin,
Her eyes will grow tighter, and start to move down,
And then they will shut with one sharp painful sound.

You're foolish, I warned you. Why didn't you hear?
Your voice only comes when the 'end' is so clear.
Well speak up my darling, and voice what you need,
Before beauty is closed on your unspoken pleas.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Yourmyangel

    I really really like this..your are an amazing writer..and thank you for my comment..keep up the great work 5\5

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Again...have I mentioned how obsessed I am with this poem?

    I am VERY obsessed. Yes I am indeed.

  • 17 years ago

    by Emi08

    5/5!! i absolutly loved it...its was beautifully horrifying(lol)...great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

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    That is so amazing, Geo... and so... true. It seems to simple a word, but that's all I can think of... true.

    Amazing... I'd give it a 1,000 if i could.

    I love you sooo much!

    Car

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Sierra

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