by awww Aug 31, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
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This poem is in filipino, so if you cant speak tagalog you will not understand it. If you cant read it |
by ROSE
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Galing!..sweet torture ang dating?..galing mu talaga!...naka relate ako dun..sana magbati kau dalawa noh?.para masaya.=D..More power!.=) |
by ECILA ice
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Ok hope you can handle some little critism.. just wanted to be honest and wanted to help you.. una, ndi ko maintindihan kung may rhyming ba tlga ung poem mo o wla? coz as i try to check it out, there are some stanzas that rhymes and some doesn't rhyme. second, i love the message though it somehow confuses me.. sino ba tlga ang iyong main character (i mean to whom do you dedicate this poem)? isang kaibigan ba o isang mahal mo (as in your "ex")?.. |
by Jessica
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Wow, that was amazing! Lol, yesh.. Sorry, I don't really understand.. But it seems cool.. =P Anywayyss, can you write your poems in english next time? Tehee.. Nice job |
by Misstress
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Okey ito ah, |