Missing you!

by Sweet lig   Sep 11, 2006

No wonder, im missing you now
Not being able to hold, to touch
To feel, to talk
And even to see you
Day by day,
I was thinking of you
Wondering if you shining
On me from above

I miss you (brother)
Your wonderful smile
Your sweet face
Your tuneful voice
Your jokes
Your laugh
Your sweet caress
Your advice

I miss you (brother)
When you preach me about my suitors
When you ask me for help
When you frightened me on the dark
When we sang a song together in home
When we talk about our funny stories
When you call my name
When you felt anger

I miss you (brother)
The all memories that you left
The fruits that you always give on me
The arguments and the fights
That we had
The last word that you say from me
I cant forget
The last smile
The last voice that i heard from u and,
The last tears that ive shown
From your eyes
Especially, the last breath you take

I miss you (brother)
But now, now your gone
All I can do is pray for you
To be happy forever
Wherever your are now
And now, I must move on
Trying to forget all the memories
But I cant let go of you

I write this poem for my brother, at young age (23) he past away 2 months ago. Thru this poem I want to express how much I miss him so much, until now I always remembered how hard he fight for hes death. Well, its painful but I have to accept it!
Anyway, thanks for reading my poems and may god bless u all!

i really appreciate your commetns and rates...ty


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  • 11 years ago

    by Katie

    Oh, this poem is so sweetly sad. It really made me think of losing one of my own brothers. I really like it, even though it saddened me. Good job!

  • 11 years ago

    by 4EvErMaKeBeLiEvE

    Just remember he will always be proud of you and he will always be in your heart!

  • 12 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very deep and well written! The flow was good, the word choice was good, and the concept was deep. Although, it did seem a little repetitive... 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by fakesmile

    Astig itong tula mu.. anyone can really relate to this poem.. dahil halos lahat tayo namatayan na.. wow! i seriously think you are an amazing poet.. 5/5 idol kita!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Erica

    Sorry about ur loss, niicely written.5/5