Late Happy Birthday

by Goran Rahim   Sep 17, 2006


My heart received a special gift
A day after my birthday
A message from an angel
Saying happy birthday.

I did not expect that
That is why the heart was joyful
She made my day more shining
My birthday was more meaningful.

Late, but she said happy birthday
It was nice of her for sure.
It was late, but made the heart happy
As it could not wait anymore.

thank you for remembering me
Thank you for saying happy birthday
Some simple words from you
Was greatest moment of the day

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I don't care if this is a perfect poem or the worse one I ever have, but I really had to write this and post it, so please deal with it.(LOL) down voters are welcome .

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Hey i loved it! i gave it a 5/5, not a 4. gee.

    5/5 always david

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    This one was good, but I thought that it could have been better. *4/5*

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    This is a righteous poem dude. I like it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Amazing and loving. I like it. Hehe. I felt the happiness in it Goran, very nicely done. :]

  • 17 years ago

    by desigirl

    You are proving it how much you adore a simple sentence if it is from the girl you love, and it was so nice of her to remember you in this day, I hope now she knows your love is deeper than the ones Shakeaspeare always wrote about.Truly I mean it..

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