My prince...my savior

by waiting 4 some1   Sep 23, 2006


I need to tell you something, i need to tell you this.
believe it or not you are the only one whom i miss.
rumors were exactly true that you are my prince.
a savior, who revived me from the world of darkness.
have i failed when i considered you as my bliss.
i do not ask for something, i do not ask for a kiss.
my only wish is to be with you, no more or less.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    Wonderful poem,it was so touching and the words were very delicate.they are the same words that I can tell them to my best friend even she deserves the same name<<savior>>.True friends are everything.

    well done5\5...

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Adel! hehe, don't you know?...this poem you have made it called acrostic!
    The title should also be the name, doen't have to, but mostly ppl do do that.
    Look at my poem for Carlos, or my friend David who made one called My princess. He is in my favorite list, easy to track down.

    I hope you are doing good, little buddy.

    Love,

    your big sister Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Awesome poem and the way u put the letters together too but i like the poem very much..good job

    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by ashley

    I like it =) especialy how you put the name in there.

  • 17 years ago

    by ashley

    Good job i liked how you put the name in there=) thnx for commenting me!

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