by LockedInEternity Sep 25, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
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Quiet was the ocean, |
by Paiger
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Terifying insite, very dramatic, I don't understand the part about how she can't see? why would she not be able to see anymore? was she never able to see? it just pops out to me because its the only part that doesn't seem to fit, Otherwise its a really well writen poem :) Great Job |
by Melpomene
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To me I didn't think it should go into the nature category even though it has a nature effect over it, just seems to of been better placed somewhere else. Not that, that matters!. Overall a gorgeous poem. Truely stunning and an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work.~mel |
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This ones awesome hun. it flowed perfectly. |
by Kalee
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That was an EXCELLENT poem. i couldnt take my eyes off the screan. IT WAS WONDERFUL. there was nothing wrong with it. 5/5 |
by Jenni
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Wow. this poem was superb! the ending was amazing, i felt as though it was me who was the next victim. you did a wonderful job on making me feel like i was there. 5/5 |