by X2892 Oct 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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Cant believe what I did- |
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Good poem! There is a lot of emotion in it and your word choice is great. My only suggestion for improvement is that the lines are broken up in awkward way sin some spots, which makes the flow a little off, but besides that its perfect! Keep it up-- |
by UnToLd TrUtH
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This is really good....I love the way you write :) 5/5 |
by Kristina
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Aww a wonderful sad but beautiful poem. love is such a weird thing. i really like what you said in the poem. really great stuff! keep writing! 5/5 |
by JAZMINE A C
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This is a good one i give u 5/5 |
by Piece of Me
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Hey its amazing it shows a deep pasion that most cant portray! keep it up |