Time. {Haiku}

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Oct 7, 2006


-Time.-

A lily pad sits,
In the icy blue water,
Drifting away time.

© Jenna Elphick
October 7, 2006.

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A haiku is a Japanese style poem consisting of three lines
with the syllable count 5, 7, 5.
A haiku is generally based on nature.

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--Meaning being that I view everyone of us as a lily pad Watching time pass us by every single second, a second we will never get back.--

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Great Haiku!

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, Jenna! This was awesome! I loved the whole hidden meaning. ;P Very clever. Tehe. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    *tear.. i love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so strong and so believable i was captured in the moment and got carried away reading it. That must have meant something :)

    please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Again, you have captured a style that I have not mastered. Bravo. Loved this one.

    Must commend anyone who can write one of these.

    Happiness
    Jeannie

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