An inevitable fate

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Oct 8, 2006


Look into my eyes tell me what you see?
do you find it good cheating on me?

do you feel a buzz from the wrong and the bad?
because even if thats so it makes me mad.

because it was you who fought for my heart,
i knew you were conniving right from the start,

but i opened my heart and let u right in,
and this is the thanks i get for it,

i hoped you would be true and love me forever,
i really liked us being together,

but why did i trust you when i knew your past,
probably because you said we would last,

you promised me joy and a happy life,
now i sit here holding a knife,

why would do this to someone so pure,
why didn't you tell me you didn't love me no more,

but its over now anyway and theres no more tears to cry,
so i hope you satisfied with the reason i died.

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  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    I actually have tears in my eyes. You write with so much depth and emotion. Your poems are so meaningful. You go through a lot.

    I'm honoured to be able to read your works of art.

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Yet another favourite.
    It conveyed so much emotion and anger and hurt, and i liked the words and flow.
    Another good job and another 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    I think that this poem was sad and that it belongs in the sad catagory. Also you need to check your grammer. You need to place question marks in the end of the appropiate sentence and so on. Also you should break it up so that it can be easier for the reader to read. But other then that I think it was a very wonderful poem filled with sadness, bitterness, and anger. You have done a great job. 5/5

    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow! Very strong and very sad! 5/5 Keep up the great work. Great job on this one!

    Innoc3ntStar

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Oh my god!!! This is such a sad poem!! So much emotian is in it! A very touching read! Keep it up! xx

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