Conversation of a suicide and a friend

by just a little girl   Oct 14, 2006


It doesn't have to be this way
I would be with you every day
Help you take away the pain
And start over again

You have already done enough for me
Now please just let me be
All I want is for it to end
Give you no more wounds to tend

I don't want to live without you
life by myself, I don't have a clue
I want to take you away
Leave your problems behind today

No I think it would be best
All I want is it to be painless
I have had too much pain
Can't bear to do it all again

You leave me with nothing to do
I'm not going to live without you
We can leave this world together
Lie in eternal peace forever

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  • 16 years ago

    by Zara Baines

    VERY GOOD, WELL WRITTEN

  • 16 years ago

    by ragrag

    I love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Beautifully depressing lol. Some parts seemed to lack the flow the rest of poem held. I think if you spiced up your vocab a little, this could be a really great poem. Good read. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Really interesting idea,this was really different especially

    You leave me with nothing to do
    I'm not going to live without you
    We can leave this world together
    Lie in eternal peace forever

    that stanza i liked your flow and liked your stories
    Keep writing honey
    Take care of yourself
    See ya
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This poem was very well written and it had a lot of emotion, im confused about the end tho, did she tell her friend to kill herself too so they will still be together? anyway it was a very good poem 5/5

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