by BeautifulxMess Oct 15, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
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Why do I try when I know I can't? |
by Mousie
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Unspoken desires, |
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5/5 great poem thanks for comment on "My hang up" keep writing |
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Woah! As people have said before, its a very emotianal peice of writing. So meaningful. Wow.. Just wow. Its great! Keep it up! xx |
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Very emotional and it did make me cry, takes a lot to do that so this poem really is good :D |
by Jenni Marie
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I liked this, i can relate, i like your style of writing, and i thought the flow and imagery was very good. 5/5 |