My tears =)

Okay i really did like this poem. you were very good at getting your point across. i do have a few suggestions for this:

"They'd tell you, how my head
Is confusing for a lot of things

They'd tell you, all my thought of self
And my wishes, my life would end..."

I think it would look better as

"They'd tell you, how my head
Is confused for so many reasons

They'd tell you, all my thoughts
And my wish, of my life would end..."

and then maybe if you added at the end

"If only my tears could speak...."

Just what i think would make the poem sound better.
but over all i really did like the poem.
5/5

This is a well written poem, i love the wording and feeling in this poem
well done

This is a well written poem, i love the wording and feeling in this poem
well done

Cliche, but not too bad. I'm not too sure what else to say, but if I were you, I'd get away from cliche.
For, when you aren't writing cliche like, you do an amazing job. Particarly on nature poems.=]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5

I wasnt really sure at times what you were talking about in some places. I didnt think it should be in hte slang catogory i think it should be placed somewhere else. The emotion was great and meaningful Good effort~mel