Loving You

by x.Athame.x   Oct 15, 2006


So hard is it for me
To gaze upon your face
Without feeling pain
Or aching deep inside
So lonely is it when
I sit and think of you
But never are you here
Save, for in my dreams
This passionate flame
Burning within my soul
Is scorching my heart
And a flood, now, here
Of crimson, does swiftly flow
I am oh so painfully
But so quickly too
Losing last bits of control
When I see you eyes
Looking so gently into mine
My breath catches
And then it is gone
Gone like those last rays
Of the beautiful sunset
And my control is fleeting
Like the stars before dawn
But my love for you is growing
No matter how I try
To tear my heart from
Your, gentle grasp.

(c) Luna 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    My only suggestion is to move "From" down into the last line. I just hink that would flow better--- Beautifully penned! Your works are so unique! Keep writing!

    xxEvilAngelxx