Alone

by Jen   Oct 19, 2006


The pain is unbearable,
he feels so alone,
death is upon him,
and no one is home.

He holds on to his chest,
whilst gasping for breath,
he thinks to himself,
how will his family cope with his death.

He now starts to twinge,
as the pain sear,
he needs to say goodbye,
yet no one is here.

maybe its was meant this way,
he was supposed to be alone,
he could no longer stay,
and with a moan....

he slipped away,
with no one there,
he died alone,
which was rather unfair.

[didnt know what category this fitted under so i placed it under other]
©
~*~Jen~*~

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  • 17 years ago

    by Carrence Verona

    I like youR poEm.. somEtimes tHis is whAt i feel.. keep it up..

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    God Jen you really hit the nail on the head with this one :(( I dont know how you did it but i swear you're inside my heart. This is exactly to the letter how i feel :((

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Wow!
    This is one of your best Jen, it was so chilling and sad.
    The flow was great! It all fit perfectly!
    Just... wow!
    5/5
    *Gem*

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