No one can stop him from his thrill

This is my first time attempting to write a horror poem most of the time i write sad poems but this one is for a very close friend and what her horrid brother did to her and tried to do to me but i was the lucky one and got away...
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in the night he waits
for you to come
he's going to make your blood run
he's going to kill
it gives him such a thrill
he cuts your throat
and drinks your blood
kisses your cold lips
and moves on
to your stomach
devours your internal organs
he smacks his lips
and goes for more
eating and eating
your rosy flesh
then he stops
he wants you no more
moves on to another
he used you
all he wanted was to abuse you
but now he's on another
this time it's a little girl
so innocent,so young
he breaks into her room
crashes down on her bed
he rips her clothes and moves in
riping,smashing,banging,crashing
she is crying,dying and trying to forget
he is enjoying every single minute
of it
he rips and tears
right into her neck
drinking it as if it was
sweet and succulent
then he starts to rape
her up the a.s.s.
blood going every where,
s.h.i.t. flying through the air
when he's done
he gets up and leaves
she doesn't even have time to grieve
then yet again he moves on
to another
this time a young woman
he takes his claws
and drills them in her
riping out her skull
she's screaming out in pain
but he does it again
licking her veins as they bleed out blue(look out he could be coming for you)
she's still screaming with pain
but he still has more fun to gain
taking his claws
he digs them in deep into her knees
she's pleading and pleading for him to stop but he's not done
riping them out as her legs break
he drinks the blood
he wants more
he needs it
he thrives of of it
he takes the body
eats the bones
now she's dead
he has killed yet another
now he's on the run looking for more young girls to kill
no one can stop him
from his true will
nothing can replace his insane thrill
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it's the best i could do...hope you like it...please vote/comment on this poem and maybe more i'll return the fav thanks so much
auna