So Called Friends

by Tammie   Oct 21, 2006


I sit here all alone
This rainy saturday
Gazing out my window
Deep in thought, far away

My so called friends are out
Together having fun
While I sit here lonely
Smile vanished, like the sun

Friday they were talking
Of the night they had planned
I wasn't included
Exclusion I can't stand

And as I left I said
"Bye, have a good weekend"
Deceit about to come
From one of my best friends

"Don't know what I'm doing"
From her mouth the lie came
But I knew the real truth
Frustrated I became

I got a call last night
Laughing in the background
They were out at dinner
As I soon sadly found

Missing out on the fun
The same as last weekend
I'm glad I mean so much
To all my so called friends.

* It's not much of a poem, just the story of what happened to me this weekend i had to get out. *

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Gee. this is a sad poem. now you have to think. are they your friends? real friends.

    if i were your friend i would include you in all times we all go out. i would be the friend.

    i love it. i felt this story line and words just interwined perfectly. 5/5

    david

  • 17 years ago

    by Mark

    Great poem but really sad what happened. I'm sorry for what did happen..

    But none the less, great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww.. I'm really sorry about that. I hope that you are doing ok.. But you did an amazing job keeping the flow and rhtyhm of the poem :) .. It's something that I think people can relate to. Great job on this. 5/5 Stay strong && Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    If you really want to go with them why not ask to go along and see what pitiful excuse they come up with then. Honestly, it's no good getting upset over what their doing and you're not, just think, well I can do things with other friends or on my own that's just as good. Or again, if you really want to go with them, just ask, and if they say no you'll know just how worth hanging around with them is.
    Good vent write anyway, hope things get cleared up soon.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Aww, *hugs*
    Ya, my friend Patricia does this to me all the time, she has invitiations and she gives everyone one but me. I've known her since the 3rd grade.. yeah shes a b*t*h But hey, I have other friends..

    I usuallly choose which stanzas I like the best but I like them all.

    Excellent,
    5/5

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