by disturbed one Oct 22, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Screaming Inside |
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Lmao wow... |
by Jessie
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Woa dude. You lettin ppl start pushin you around now..Im just flippin kidding ahahaha. Awesome poem. Love it. |
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Ya when u said that i looked back at it and it doesnt seem as complete as it could be...thanks for the advice |
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Great poem but it could use another stanza in the middle... it just seems too short to get the meaning and emotion out. Otherwise its awesome! |