Eternity Seems To End

Oh this was so very sad. Your writing always touches my heart.

Speeding away early morning
Looking for something called love
Singing songs for my own ears
Watching angels falling from above

I would have loved to hear the songs you were singing :)

Take care my dear friend.
Love Cindy

Brilliant opening!
It just draws the reader in and compels them to read more.
As always your flow and concept has no faults.
Amazing!
5/5
*Gem*

(And of course i love my chair, we've been together 3 years ;)

This dreamland has no end
As i don't want to open my eyes
Nightmares don't touch me anymore
Since my senses have turned to ice.
___

^^ I loved that stanza. This was amazing. I loved the concept....

sorry i havent been commenting your work lately. i'll get to it asap!! Keep writing!! take care!

-Poetess

"WoW"
OMG! do I have to say More??!!
this is just..perfect...Beautiful penned huni!
I love the last line..this poem is absolutely awesome!
very well written & wonderfully expressed!

Keep it up
Best Of Luck
NemO x0x0x0x0x

Again awesome write. always love ur work.....
waise y hav u started sad poems again. and no love poems? r u alrite dear? b happy yaar. i love ur romantic poems as well.