Far Away

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Oct 24, 2006


Another hour, another smile down,
feels like I'm light years away from you,
Like the heart without the blood,
Like the old without the new.

Why does lack of you, bring so much pain?
Mind so cold, alone,
Oblivious to the surroundings of the world,
As i sit and wait on my own.

Fear destroyed by fearless,
Your arms keep me safe,
Sheltering me from evil and the bad,
Your comfort makes my heart race.

A heart beat so close, yet so far away,
Increase of each second apart,
How is it possible? feeling so sad,
A strain upon a fragile heart.

THIS POEM IS ABOUT MY BF AND WHEN HES NOT HERE WHICH IS MOST OF THE TIME :(:( xxx Alex xxx

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  • 16 years ago

    by Allison

    I don't usually like love poems, but this one was good. The sadness laced in the words and it fit. Keep writing. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Good poem but not your best. One change you could make if you want to is in line 3 of stanza 1 maybe try "Like a heart" instead of "Like the heart" I think it just sounds better but that is just me. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by eXile

    Dang, this is really good, 5s

  • 17 years ago

    by Ankit V Master

    An emotion conveyed with all of its manifestation , probably some emotion with which all of us identifies and the beauty of ur poem is, u can give a contrast between happiness and sadness.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ..."a strain upon a fragile heart"......Sorrow and sadness and strains such as these are, inherently, profound catalysts for greatly strengthening the fragile heart....your heart has grown stronger already......bet you know what I mean.....

    A touching, Shakespeareanesque, write...

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