Sacrifice

Nitin
Another awesome choice for the featured writer of the week. Congrats! This is such a sad poem. It brings tears to the readers eyes.

My paper heart bleeds every single day
So i hide behind your house and pray
If i could be given just one more chance
To sing an endless song for you and stay

This stanza just moved me so much...an excellent choice by Sam!
Love Cindy

This poem brought on the tears. How hard it would be to love someone you can not have. Execellent job!

Though my fate has other plans for me
I could feel them when i close my eyes
And i won't mind to dig myself in my own grave
I know in love one is bound to sacrifice

I hope one day your wishes all come true.
Always thinking of you
Love Your friend Cindy

Awesome poem, sad but good

"My paper heart bleeds every single day
So i hide behind your house and pray"

Paper heart... it seems so much more fragile when described this way.
Excellent wording.
5/5
*Gem*

You probably dont need this, you have so many people already commenting your awsome poems, it seems no matter how long my poems are, they could never be as good, or get as much attention, and you do that very well, great poem, 5/5