Perfect Is What We Aim For

by ALEX   Oct 30, 2006


Perfect is what we aim for, though it's an uphill fight.
Perfect makes it better, when nothing's going right.

Perfect is enchanting, illusions you can't catch.
Perfect makes you sparkle, a shine no one can match.

Perfect is a fortress, that you can hide behind.
Perfect is denial, a game played in your mind.

Perfect takes some effort, and that you can't forget.
Perfect is what we aim for, Perfect is what we get.

10/29/06

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  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Great poem, ur work flows really well! the title drew me in because it reminded me of the band "cute is what we aim for". really well written piece of work, well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Another great poem, i've really enjoyed reading your work and i'll be adding you to my favourites :)
    I look forward to reading more of your poems.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    Very nice.. It flowed really nicely, and the rhythmn was really good too.. well done 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Very thought provoking write. Perfect is something we crave these days, yet anything rarely is as we constantly want more...
    This was a very simple yet truthful write. I enjoyed it very much.
    Oh and while I'm here hope you had a nice thanksgiving, I don't celebrate it (I'm English) but thanks for the nice thoughts. Also, I was reading "about you" we're pretty similar, curly hair, in love, love cats, hate drugs, easily confused, and I'm somewhat invisible too...Anyway take care,
    Silver J

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Very very True...
    we do aim for perfection all the time...
    but not always get it...
    imagine if the world was perfect...
    how would we feel... hehe...

    it was a very nice poem!
    loved it lots...
    keep it up!

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