In a Whisper

by Freddie   Oct 31, 2006


I know its not that good but i needed to get it out.

I've had enough, I'm giving up, I see no reason here today,
To Hope and pray that it'll be ok,
Because theres nothing I can say,
Nothing will make them understand,
Nothing will make them see,
I'm trapped inside this dark black hole,
And it's me and only ME!
Nothing will help to ease the pain,
Nothing will i say will make me sane,
[they cannot win, they need to see,
that I have changed,
That this is me]
I'm simply the beginning of my end,
I don't need help, I don't need friends,
I'm dying slowly inside and out,
And you don't even know what deaths really about,
So just go away, leave me alone,
I'm more than happy here on my own,
I'm fine with death, I don't need you,

(And then I whispered Yes I Do).

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  • 9 years ago

    by CountlessMoments

    My heart is so crushed right now and this poem literally describes how i feel.. Thank-you, I hope you feel better.

  • 12 years ago

    by Maydee

    This is amazing and beautiful!!

  • 14 years ago

    by smashley13

    This is really really good!

  • 15 years ago

    by andi

    Yeah this was incredible it rly spoke 2 me good job 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by VeinsofHate

    "I'm fine with death, I don't need you,

    (And then I whispered Yes I Do)."

    those lines are so painful and true. i loved the whole poem. love love loved it. amazing work and good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5

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