Big Part

This poem is great!!! I loved it!Very good rhyming and flow!
xoxo

P.S. I'm sooo sorry if it seems like I was copying the ideas of your poems! I didn't mean to!! I'm really really sorry! I thought they came from my own head! I'm sorry! Forgive me please!?

Aw i loved this one. i love the meaning behind it great job!!

"It's where you keep your memories
And your feelings left unspoken
And no matter how hard you try
It's easy to get it broken

Only give it away for love
Never for a meaningless crush
It's not worth all the heartache
For something as hollow as lust" i think was my fav part but i dont know i liked it all way too much ur an excellent writter dont let anyone tell u other wise and dont let anyone cruch ur dreams/hopes 5/5 always hun ttyl
Kate~

"It can be your personal heaven
But it could be your living hell"
God you nailed that one, everytime i fall inlove it becomes hell, sometimes i wish i didint have a heart, i cant stop reading your poems, i hope you never stop writing :))

"Your heart is a big part of you
It's where your emotions dwell
It can be your personal heaven
But it could be your living hell"

i particularly loved that stanza, its soo bloody true and well written as always hun =]=]=]

~*~Jen~*~