One day ill let this go

I really liked this poem!! At times I feel the same way...So far i like all ur poems...Keep Writing!!!!

I can’t stand you but I need you
If I want to be fine

you realy know how to write! you take simplicity, and turn it into magic, hold it tight!

Narc xxx

Another good write. This one stanza was my problem though,
And the more I think about it
The more I become sure,
the more im overwhelmed
And everything becomes a blur

I think the last line was the problem. It was too long and threw off the flow. So maybe try revising it a little like this

And the more I think about it
The more I become sure.
Yet when I'm overwhelmed
Is when everything blurs.

That's just a suggestion...

But of course, you knew the good stuff was coming. I enjoyed your line about the raincoat protecting you. I like your use of understandable illustrations. You don't try to confuse the readers with big words. It's like your diary on paper. When we write to ourselves, we don't get lost in words you need dictionaries for or sayings you need a professor to explain. So I enjoy your simplicity and the way you pour yourself into your writings. Good job!
I enjoyed a lot!
Charisma*
2nd and final comment

Anouther great poem, i really like the style you have. a few gramatical errors, (oneday? one day)

i could really relate to this one. very good

shadow dancer

Another great one.. 5/5!